tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33599441.post116248752540551177..comments2024-03-28T01:11:53.559-07:00Comments on Electric Spec Editor Blog: Short story first lineslesleylsmithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14872977902924014581noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33599441.post-1162677873484650842006-11-04T15:04:00.000-07:002006-11-04T15:04:00.000-07:00Great links guys and gals! Thanks.Great links guys and gals! Thanks.Rashenbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03495120136277921981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33599441.post-1162576776235131832006-11-03T10:59:00.000-07:002006-11-03T10:59:00.000-07:00it's awesome, of course.it's awesome, of course.Betsy Dornbuschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10980243336873019233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33599441.post-1162527792454439712006-11-02T21:23:00.000-07:002006-11-02T21:23:00.000-07:00How about this one for a story?"I'd put a condom i...How about this one for a story?<BR/><BR/>"I'd put a condom in the little black purse that I took to the funeral, a good thing, too." <BR/><BR/>This is from my own, as yet unpublished, flash piece. I wanted to post it because the first line came to be before the rest of the story and I still really like it.Betsy Dornbuschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10980243336873019233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33599441.post-1162527616972296542006-11-02T21:20:00.000-07:002006-11-02T21:20:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Betsy Dornbuschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10980243336873019233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33599441.post-1162511305373374452006-11-02T16:48:00.000-07:002006-11-02T16:48:00.000-07:00You'll hear this again, but my all-time favorite f...You'll hear this again, but my all-time favorite first line, book or story, is Tad William's<BR/><BR/><I>It began in mud, as so many things do.</I>Betsy Dornbuschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10980243336873019233noreply@blogger.com