tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33599441.post6002877612616579951..comments2024-03-28T01:11:53.559-07:00Comments on Electric Spec Editor Blog: The Art of the Slow Reveallesleylsmithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14872977902924014581noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33599441.post-69629344834634450712008-09-12T07:13:00.000-07:002008-09-12T07:13:00.000-07:00Beautiful, brilliant story. What carries the reade...Beautiful, brilliant story. What carries the reader to the reveal, I think, is the voice, the intriguing world, and her obvious pain and bitterness (we always want our MCs to get past that). <BR/><BR/>It makes me think on voice, and fitting it to the character. Her snarky tone and bitterness just suited the character and her situation so well.ssashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15527483283426518167noreply@blogger.com