24 May 2022

From Author Ramthun

We are excited to feature "The Little Hitchhiker" by Associate Editor Bonnie Ramthun in the marvelous May 2022 issue of Electric Spec. Bonnie was kind enough to send along some comments about the story.

I grew up in Wyoming and drove many miles along the State's highways and two-lane roads, sometimes during terrible storms. If you've ever encountered a ground blizzard near Elk Mountain or driven across the Red Desert at night during a thunderstorm, you know what it's like to be driving white-knuckled at the edge of catastrophe.

One night I came across Steven Spielberg's short film, Duel. The screenplay was written by the great Richard Matheson and was the first film directed by Spielberg. In the story, a traveling salesman ends up being chased and terrorized by an unseen semi-truck driver. The 74-minute film was an ABC Movie of the Week in 1971.

Spielberg is known for hiding his villain, most famously in the movie Jaws. The near unbearable tension of this man-eating shark movie is that for most of the film, you don't see the shark at all. Rumor has it that Spielberg didn't intend to do this. He was going to feature his shark, but the mechanical creature kept malfunctioning, and he had to come up with clever ways to keep it out of the picture.

After watching Duel, I'm not so sure about this rumor. Jaws aired in 1975, four years after Duel. The way Spielberg uses the truck driver in Duel is startlingly similar to the way he uses the shark in Jaws. We never see the face of the truck driver in Duel. When the truck first menaces the traveling salesman, played with tense perfection by Dennis Weaver, he spots it reflecting from the trembling, shaking side mirror of his car.

Spielberg also used this side-mirror shot in Jurassic Park, this time for the tension-releasing humorous moment of seeing "Objects in Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear" as the T-Rex chases the Jeep holding our protagonists.

In Duel, the side mirror shot is terrifying. The semi-truck roars like a predator as it attempts to run the salesman's car off the road. The windshield reflects the glaring sun, never giving a glimpse of the driver inside. The tension ratchets up with every passing moment as the truck, and its unseen driver try to hunt down and kill David Mann.

Sure enough, the next morning, I had to get up and drive to Rock Springs, Wyoming. I admire and appreciate our American trucking fleet, but that day I regarded them all with suspicion. And during that drive, I wondered if one of those trucks was driven by something other than a human driver.

The next week I wrote The Little Hitchhiker, inspired by winter driving and a short film called Duel. I hope you enjoyed it. And if you haven't seen Duel, I highly recommend giving it a try.



Thanks, Bonnie! Very interesting!
Be sure to check out "The Little Hitchhiker" and all the rest of the stories on May 31, 2022!

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